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Author Name: Freependeriki 2 Comments
Date Added: July 03, 2011 12:07:00 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
Category: Philosophy Add To Favorites | Text Only
When it comes
Take a Spring day...when it comes
where flowers bloom to face the Sun
and feel it
Take a Summer's Sun...when it comes
with a high sky of viscous blue
and feel it
Take an Autumn's grain...when it comes
a bounty from the harvest ground
and feel it
Take a Winter's snow...when it comes
cold purity laid upon the land
and feel it

Take a morning glory...when it comes
where Moon and Star gleam in dawning light
and feel it
Take a midday sunlit view...when it comes
hazy on to horizon's edge
and feel it
Take an evening gloom...when it comes
where crimson clouds hang high
and feel it
Take a midnight Moon...when it comes
to make a magic lantern light
and feel it

Take a newborn babe...when it comes
with a pure face of innocence
and feel it
Take a child's smile...when it comes
born a simple pleasures
and feel it
Take an adults grace...when it comes
good councils given free
and feel it
Take an elder's maturity..when it comes
life's wisdoms handed on
and feel it

Take all that nature shows...when it comes
Think of creations glories
and never.....

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Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on July 4, 2011 07:47:40 AM Report


  I have yet to meet a man who combines Nature with Life ....

Through the years as I have written poems myself ....trying to find the poetic words .

.Comparing then together....Because Nature and Life To me are the same in so many ways....

 Now do you understand why I am drawn to your style of writing.....?

 You are a blessing to us on this site.... Please never stop writing you have such a gift my friend..

. I love this poem another favorite....*****

 Always ~ She Whispers 


Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on July 3, 2011 02:14:45 PM Report
a true poet can make one "feel it" with his own words.  great job of tracing some of life's most beautiful feelings.  I really like your style.


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