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Author Name: FreeTristan 8 Comments
Date Added: June 01, 2011 22:06:46 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
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A Farewell to Love
 
A Farewell to Love

 

T'was in a nightmare’s tale where horrors dwell,
there rose a perfect love with caring sigh,
which lighted deepest depths of darkest hell,
inspiring passion on which dreams rely.
Have ere the words of life been writ so sweet,
to be enshrined in pleasure’s grasp to feel?
To touch a willing heart midst every beat,
it seemed each moment lived became more real.
But rainbows ceased and dried the wishing wells –
this story’s end would bring such grief to bear...
because the death this final chapter tells
relates a pain so difficult to share.
My eyes preserved each treasured tear t'was cried –
when passion wept as love laid down and died.
 
 
 
 
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on July 15, 2014 07:26:34 PM Report

...just checking to see if I had missed any of your beautiful poems.  Every time I read I collect new thoughts...that's what great poetry does.  It helps us relate to our present state or perhaps serves to dig up memories on the borderline of forgotten.  the stand-out line for me today is...But rainbows ceased and dried the wishing wells---wonderfully sad.
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on October 9, 2011 10:38:28 PM Report
There are a lot of good things in this poem. The main message is dramatic. Many of the lines are brilliant. It does suffer from a lack of poetic flow, due to too many words tossed in to make it seem even more dramatic.

Mixing Olde English and modern English always diminishes the message. You should go one way or the other, but not try to throw in a couple of Olde English words to make the write appear to be steeped in history. You have a lot of potential, Triston. You just need to clean up your style...len


Comment By: PremiumDan J. Mazurek on September 26, 2011 04:42:40 PM Report


what a heart felt  poetic view


from everything inside of you. 

Comment By: FreeMichelle on July 19, 2011 07:04:25 PM Report


I too hope this is not pain you are presently dealing with, Tristan. You write with such moving emotion and expression, and your form is perfect as always. What a heart-wrenching loss you depict here. To share alove that protects you from the horror of the world and then to lose it, what could be worse?


 


Hugs,


~*Shell*~

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on June 4, 2011 04:59:32 PM Report


Gosh ...Tristan....when you write you mean business!! This is just awesome as always..... *****

 Always ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeAdri on June 4, 2011 12:37:20 PM Report
As always, magnificent poetry, truly brilliant. Lovely sentiment and a true sonnet
Adri x

Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on June 2, 2011 06:51:58 PM Report


 love your sonnets...this one is no exception...always impeccable in the iambic pentameter.


but ooh...this one stings like a bee.  the conclusion pulls at my heart, especially the last line. 


this is one that makes one say...dang! wish I'd written that.  but then one would have to own the pain along with it.  hope you and your love are on solid ground. ♥  always your friend...and fan of your beautiful sonnets, shee

Comment By: FreeHenry M. on June 2, 2011 10:18:32 AM Report
Wow this is good! A poem that tells a story of heart break, I hope this is fiction for you Tristan.   Henry




 


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