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Author Name: Moderatorlostmysanity 6 Comments
Date Added: April 23, 2011 19:04:27 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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"Walk in the Rain"
I took a walk in the rain
To hide the tears from the pain I'm in
I took a walk in the rain
Cause that's how I feel inside
Dark and gloomy
With a hint of miserable
Took a walk in the rain
By the ocean side
To have the salt ocean air
Come across my face
Try to calm how I feel inside
Listen to the waves crash
Against the rocks
Hear the rain hit the water
Trying to keep my mind off
What's inside


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Comments:
Comment By: Freeleahlopez on May 18, 2012 12:46:40 PM Report

Deep powerful words.


Comment By: FreeTimespell on October 21, 2011 09:55:56 PM Report
Of the drop..



Initial dropped



Welcome to the pain...



deep inside the clown still rides

commissions from the reign 



Shut up hooray...


Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on May 1, 2011 02:28:04 AM Report
Even when we are surrounded by people who love us, we can still feel alone. When we depart this life, nobody is there to take that mysterious journey with us.In a real sense, we live our lives in a certain isolation, knowing that no-one will share our end. This poem describes that feeling perfectly...Len



PS.."I took a walk in the rain
To hide the tears from the pain." I have no idea what that is supposed to mean..


Comment By: FreeH. Louise on April 24, 2011 10:34:53 AM Report


It always rains on those who deserve the sun.


Great write.


 


H.

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on April 24, 2011 06:29:20 AM Report


Depression  fallls like rain and we sometimes just can't hold back the tears...

Its a heavy coat of darkness gloom we wear..

God knows I have walked in the rain many times to wash the stinging tears away...

 HOpe you see sunshine soon....

 Always ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on April 23, 2011 08:31:52 PM Report


Scott:  I like this write -- very well presented.


 


Lady D





 


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