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Author Name: FreeShe Whispers 5 Comments
Date Added: March 28, 2011 19:03:03 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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The Desert Mysteriousness
 There in the loneliness rain -faded into rainbow colors 
Earth unadultered as graceful as a eloquent nude 

 
 
 The twilight light cool mist clearing the coloress sand
as the soft spring breeze was singing threnadies  
 
 
 
The silken evening wears a veil of commonplace and tears
as the silence swathed in the mingled sweet atmosphere 
 
 
 
The desert vastness essence with equal ecstasy
as my only heart quieted....  accepting
 
 
 
 As the refreshing breath catches in my throat
and my mortal native heart feels happiness
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Comment By: FreeJim Kistner Jr on April 11, 2011 04:09:22 AM Report
Very nice...powerful..and I have to agree with the others who commented, my favorite lines..

As the refreshing breath catches in my throat


and my mortal native heart feels happiness






Comment By: FreeSteve on March 29, 2011 03:48:00 PM Report
This is a joy to read and well written.
Comment By: FreeAminath Agleema on March 29, 2011 05:58:04 AM Report
"As the refreshing breath catches in my throat


and my mortal native heart feels happiness"

Extremely beautiful but I like the above line most


Comment By: FreeDirk Kruger on March 29, 2011 03:52:59 AM Report
As the refreshing breath catches in my throat 
and my mortal native heart feels happiness



wow nice stuff


Comment By: PremiumDan J. Mazurek on March 28, 2011 09:38:58 PM Report


well i been in a just reading poetry mood.


my first read tonight is very inspiratonal too. 





 


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