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Author Name: Moderatorhnk903 4 Comments
Date Added: March 24, 2011 11:03:09 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Common ground

Inside the silence

that knows no bounds

two lovers search

for common ground
 

Each one struggling

to find their own way

hurtful words tossed about

until there's no more to say
 
From different worlds

they did come

still they found each other

though it seemed strange to some
Through outside pressure

they fell apart at the seams

each treading all over

the other's dreams
 

Now the battlefield is empty

there's no more sound

love came up empty

from no common ground

Author's Notes:
For those who have been through the heartbreak of love that was starcrossed from the outset.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeJ on May 17, 2011 11:00:11 PM Report
I think you found a great way to express something that so many feel. Well done!
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on March 25, 2011 08:44:30 AM Report
Dear Henry,

We will never know what true love is unless we first experience what it is not. Touching poem my friend--the truths within are heartbreaking yet familiar. Honesty in poetry is very appealing--there is nothing as powerful as when a poet's heart speaks. Nicely said!



~Barbara D.~

Comment By: FreeMoonStar on March 25, 2011 03:18:58 AM Report
Oh boy can I so relate to this!!! Sounds like my divorce.. :) or maybe I should add :(



Your wording was so out there that i can imagine many can relate to this, as many relationships sometimes get to this point..



Your ending lines in this were brilliant.. It actually made me sit up and gasp to myself..



Yuppers, reading ti again...



Huggers

Moonie xx


Comment By: FreeGlata on March 24, 2011 02:04:05 PM Report


Another powerful write, Henry...and sadly, I think that too many people can relate to this far too well. When love dies it leaves a hole in the heart and soul that you think will never be filled again.


LOL I think you need to start listening to comedy!


Just kidding :-)


Seriously, though, this is amazing, as always!


Hugs..Glata





 


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