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Author Name: FreeMoonStar 8 Comments
Date Added: March 21, 2011 01:03:27 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Who are you?
Who are you?

Who are you?
This man of smooth words falling upon my ears
Of wanton thoughts passing through me
Ahhh, they leave me breathless
Speechless, in a void of null
All closing in on me
For no where to go,
except forward
Towards your light
Your touch lingers
In my thoughts.
And I gasp with pleasure
Such sweet agony.
It should be painful, no?
Yet I laugh
For it isn't.
Instead I bask in all you give
Heart on my sleeve,
It seems my pride disobeyed me.

Do I care?
Do I dare?

I chuckle, like a schoolgirl.

Blind, I trace your features
In my hands I hold a small touch of heaven
I am lost..
Take all, I say!
Yet leave behind a small piece
To last me through the cold winter
That shall be what was once known, as my heart.


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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAndrew on March 25, 2011 08:57:01 AM Report
I'm left speechless (in that void of null).  be careful of such shadowy characters - you never know what lies just beyond the light...

Comment By: Freee. Gene Myers on March 21, 2011 09:14:02 PM Report
oh you sound like you've got it bad.   "I chuckle, like a schoolgirl."     Yup.  That says it all

You've been caught.  All he's got to do is reel you in now.

Smiles for you

Gene

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on March 21, 2011 06:22:21 PM Report


Ahhhhh......Spring love is there any other kind???now we know where you been...((Smiles...

 Love ya! ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeSteve on March 21, 2011 02:41:49 PM Report


Romance arrives like spring weather, it is warm and welcomed.  


Comment By: FreeHenry M. on March 21, 2011 08:28:59 AM Report
Am I reading this right? Has Moonie fallen in love? Woo hoo! Congratulations to you and the very lucky man who has you.  Hugs,   Henry
Comment By: FreeRobert on March 21, 2011 06:46:30 AM Report
These IMHO are words that all lovers wish the belove-ed would say to them for to feel such true emotion is worth all that one has to give Oh to be so in love---- is a wonder, this I know!
Comment By: FreeDirk Kruger on March 21, 2011 06:21:46 AM Report
Sounds like you are having fun, and in love, enjoyd it, well done

Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on March 21, 2011 01:17:41 AM Report
wow!  my HH sister,  as I read this I find myself in the same tender trap...of sweet agony!  now I know why you've been absent...taking some time off to fall in love.  You wear it well, my friend.   Love couldn't have found a more deserving one to drench with pure esctacy...Incredible!  ...and best wishes, Ljo




 


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