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Author Name: FreeAtrophiedRibbons 2 Comments
Date Added: March 02, 2011 21:03:26 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
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freefall
All that avails is flight

on wax and woven wings

I will reach towards the light

and grasp on golden strings

father hear my plight

I was reaching for my dreams

but purely out of spite

the sun threw me to the sea
Author's Notes:
tempting fate
or 
fate tempting me
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeTimespell on July 27, 2013 10:39:50 PM Report

Luck be the devil tonight.....

 

Once again thats where it went


Comment By: FreeRobert Smith Jr. on March 2, 2011 10:01:31 PM Report
Nice allegory of Icarus' attempt. Excellent write. Though I'm curious as to what emphasis is placed on the emboldened.





 


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