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Author Name: FreeMoonStar 9 Comments
Date Added: January 31, 2011 20:01:32 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Twilight comes

Twilight comes

The nighttime has arrived

And with it..


Sounds ring out



You are in my thoughts,



For under your spell,

I am your slave

For love has no answers


And I give in so willingly


Soft music plays in the background

The sound sweet as a summers night

I close my eyes,


Ever-so-slowly, I move

Body swaying,

Gently in the darkness

To the soft strains that sooth my very soul.

Gently a soft breeze fills the room,

Touching my sweat stained skin.

Oh the feeling

The joy..

Tantalizing, thrilling.

I have become one

With the soft strains of love

Sounding forth into the night

The darkness

My heat.

And the music plays on

My body sways

The breeze tickles my form

Like lovers fingers

Oh so seductively moving over me.

They tease so..

A scented candle softly lights up the darkness

Filling the room with its exquisite scent

I inhale its richness

So deep it fills me

Then softly sigh.


The music changes..

Ahh yes....

I am once again lost...

Twilight comes

The nighttime has arrived

And with it..



And I begin to sway once again.

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Comment By: FreeCathy on January 18, 2012 01:58:01 PM Report
Wow a absolutely beautiful poem for sure your descriptive word really put me in the poem ahhhhhhhhhhhh loved it

Comment By: FreeAndrew on February 4, 2011 06:17:26 AM Report

She walks in beauty, like the night  

Of cloudless climes and starry skies,  

And all that's best of dark and bright  

Meets in her aspect and her eyes;  

Thus mellow'd to that tender light       

Which Heaven to gaudy day denies.


Okay, so I can't take credit for the words - but this is what your work reminded me your own sensual, romantic manner, lovely lunar lady

Comment By: FreeGlata on February 2, 2011 11:58:34 AM Report

Lovely work, always know how to reach into the heart and into the depths of the imagination to bring out works like this!

Dream lovers...are more often than not, better than the real things, lol!

Love it!

 Hugz to ya!


Comment By: FreeHenry M. on February 2, 2011 09:00:13 AM Report
There is nothing so sweet as the tender music that is love, it is even sweeter when we surrender ourselves to it's beautiful tune. Wonderful writing as always Moonie.  Hugs,   Henry
Comment By: FreeRobert on February 1, 2011 03:49:44 AM Report

Aaah If that wer true what a heaven that would be----To have a lover such as you describe in your poem, a woman so etheral yet of flesh and blood, she would put to shame Cleopatria, Helen of  Sparta but her essence would be that of a poet---- say a new St. Vincent Millay oh that she be such she would be the Acme of Woman IMHO

 My dear Gumba you have touched the sky with this you hold my soul, you challange all. To write as you do is more than a gift IT is a blessing that few have and all desire..

Comment By: FreeDirk Kruger on February 1, 2011 02:22:35 AM Report
Love it, need more sexy poems and less hardships.....well done

Comment By: TrialTerri on January 31, 2011 09:47:00 PM Report
Lovely, lovely write. Really enjoyed.
Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on January 31, 2011 08:40:34 PM Report

...Dreams of Love take us there...again and again, yet never routine nor express passion so exquisitely!! ... so in-tune to the rhythms of Love.


"I am once again lost", your hip-hugger sista, Ljo

Comment By: Freeguest_writer on January 31, 2011 08:40:04 PM Report
what a lovely poem! it's beautifully written. i like it.


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