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Author Name: FreeKelly_xX 2 Comments
Date Added: November 24, 2010 10:11:58 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
Category: Broken Hearts Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Remember it well

Remember it well

Remember it well

The colour

A vast red beneath my black

Everyone the same that day

Yet somewhat different from usual

I wore mine there on purpose

With purpose

You didnít take long to catch on

 

Longer than the blink of an eye

They say itís long enough

To acknowledge

The blossoming

Of something new

We acknowledged so much more that day

 

They tell you all about

Skipping a heartbeat

Going weak at the knees

I admit I was nervous

And felt slightly faint

Tried not to let on


You took advantage of my unsteady state

Like so many other things that day

Suppose that made you the stronger of us both

 

Remember it well

Gone

Then by me in a second

It took a year for you to leave that place

Dark eyes


The once over

And then again for later on

No intro necessary

We knew all we needed to

 

Everyone else that day

A pair of pairs

Back of the queue

We were the remainder

Told them we didnít mind

Really- itís fine

Pity you didnít stick at maths

You were good at it

 

You told me

Life is for living

Say you like confidence in a person

Yet you fell for the mouse

Why do that?

Iím glad you did that

 

Remember it well

The passion

The intensity

The risk

Our hiding place

 

Dark eyes

Hid them behind that mask of yours

The best thing about it

It was us

A delicate shield

A constant reminder

 

A full room

Your eyes silently shouting it

I always heard you

Dark eyes

And Iíll always remember

That tragic day

When the mask came off

 

But so much more my darling

So much

Good times

Incredible

Greatest moments of my life

Bad times

We got through them

Together

 

Wrong was never an issue for us

Just everyone else

 

Remember it well

That night

I confided in you

I told you

My hand in yours

Light comfort

Dark eyes

You made it better

My wonderful drug

My sweet addiction

 

Regret nothing

Nothing

Apart from

That one tragic day

When the mask came off

 

Dark eyes

You and I against the world

Win

And lose you

Lose

And keep you

But for how long?

 

I chose for you

I lost you

For you

So why is it

That you hate me so?

Why is it

That whenever I close my eyes

There you are

Dark eyes

 

Remember it well

So well

And all I want

Is to forget

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on May 25, 2011 06:43:05 PM Report


Welcome to our site!! I see I have missed a few of your poems... to be so young you write with great depth!!!

 Always ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeJessica Ruth Myr on November 24, 2010 11:09:25 AM Report
This is so very deep, and it resonated for me so well.  Your phrasing is breathtaking and really brings out the feeling in this poem.  Beautiful work.




 


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