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Author Name: FreeLaPoeta 5 Comments
Date Added: November 20, 2010 23:11:47 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Can You Forgive Me

She quietly sobbed in my arms tonight

As I wondered if my conscious showed

The tears slowly ran down her frightened face

I wonít do it, how can I say that itís not true

In this moment I prayed soft words find my heart

Could pain be pushed away by memories of hope

I hurt her so bad and wasnít going to walk away

Fearing my emotions I cried and finally she knew

Can she forgive me; with her love I committed my sin

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on December 5, 2010 04:14:37 PM Report
With her love, I commited my sin confuses me. IT soumds like the confession of an unfaithful husband up until that last line. Yer writing is getting more polished all the time, Shady....NICE BIKE!!!...len
Comment By: FreeAdri on November 24, 2010 08:30:45 AM Report


Very powerful and intense as Glata said. This is gorgeous, I love the lingering... 

Adri x

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on November 21, 2010 07:54:53 PM Report
Such sadness..... Can they forgive  that committed sin???
Comment By: Freemaggie lopez sherry wilbur on November 21, 2010 07:38:33 PM Report
Forgiveness a really hard thing but love conquers all , now the question I would ask the inflictor here is , is the lesson learned or will it be repeated. A really heartbreaking poem. A sense of all to well reality and pain. Always Maggie.

Comment By: Freeb doneff on November 21, 2010 07:36:28 AM Report


Ouch...sounds like a pretty bad scene, but one that happnes all too often I'm sure.

Forgiveness..hard but not impossible. Forgetting...a different story.

Good write though..

B





 


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