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Author Name: Freelaura_robertson13 4 Comments
Date Added: November 08, 2010 17:11:34 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Red Flame Hair

Red flame hair

Like fire

You hold her hand

Green faced creature of jealousy.

 

Crystal clear lake

A poet stares into

Looking for the beautiful words

The image that will convey her thoughts.

 

I am the poet

I skim a stone

It ripples, ripples,

Ripples.

 

She’s different, I can be different

She’s interesting, I can be interesting,

She’s beautiful, I can be beautiful

She has flaming red hair, I can have red hair.

 

The rock falls, falls, slowly

Inbetween the green tangled growth

It hits the bottom,

It hurts.

 

I control my face

You walk in front of me, hand in hand

You’re miles away

And I can still see red flame hair.

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeJosh Williams on November 9, 2010 12:28:57 PM Report

"you're miles away" Hmm I wonder if this figurative or literal? Nice Poem. Red Hair is symbolic of many things, Very thoughtful write.


Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on November 9, 2010 07:29:36 AM Report
Another powerful poem... The eyes of Jealously!!!
Comment By: FreeRobert on November 8, 2010 07:15:35 PM Report
Jealously? I don't know but it sounds familiar for I have been there a few times myself.
Comment By: FreeMaples on November 8, 2010 06:14:07 PM Report
Oh, Laura, this is such a neat poem! I love it! "ripples ripples ripples" I could see this in my head. Great write!

 

Meg

 

 





 


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