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Author Name: FreeShe Whispers 3 Comments
Date Added: October 20, 2010 22:10:42 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Our Spirits
Should I ask did our struggling spirits turn
 the cold night breeze into a snarling wind 
that tore us both to pieces my dear
 
Has it blown us like lingering clinging dust
to the very depth of parched desert valleys
mother nature is so very clear
 
We never conspired or practised mutiny
why do we feel this tormenting hell   
 
Shall we remain happy and enjoy this intoxicaion
or to live in this consuming flame of soberness 
 with flourished awareness love dwell
 
Shed not your masculine discouraged tears 
or the emptiness of seperation fears
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeW on October 24, 2010 12:49:53 AM Report
Very intriguing. I'll try and read some more later today with more time on my hands. But I definitely liked this. Keep it up! ~W~
Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on October 21, 2010 12:36:08 PM Report
We are but what we are, with out the dogs of time to bite our heels, we take life as we live it, and what follows is what we suffer, love is all but it to has consequences~Graham
Comment By: FreeMelody on October 20, 2010 10:51:14 PM Report
"
"Shed not your masculine discouraged tears 

or the emptiness of seperation fears "

 

I like that line so much, it has a feel about it that is almost heartbreaking, you're an amazing poet that is able to touch my heart with each word , seperating emotion from actions of feel. Great piece of work :]





 


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