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Author Name: FreeAtrophiedRibbons 5 Comments
Date Added: October 04, 2010 11:10:50 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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The Skirt Of An Electric Girl
I pretended to care,
for your sake.
You never repaid in kind.
You took me for granted, knowing that I'd never stray too far.
Knowing that I'd never stray at all.
And although I was loyal, a good ear, seemingly wise and willing to aid you in any way I could..
You forgot me.
For, the risk of love had enticed you into a stupor of draining capillaries and fleeting breaths.

the risk...
is it only I that would portray it in such a manner?

As amiable as I was...as I pretended to be,
You got better, while I got worse.
And while the wise thing to do is to abandon this temple
I'm the captain, and I'm sinking with this vessel.
Author's Notes:


Your naiveté was bliss
Lost in the subtleties of unfamiliar lips
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeTristan on December 11, 2010 10:03:44 AM Report
Intriguing and engaging...  with an extra shot and a twist...  and the Captian of his soul takes down his own vessel.  Interesting -- searching for salvation in this.  Good writing.  Tristan
Comment By: FreeJennifer on October 26, 2010 11:54:17 AM Report
this speaks volumes. Love is like this. May you find a lifesaver!
jen

Comment By: FreeLeanne on October 17, 2010 01:45:59 AM Report
I love this and the title.
Comment By: Freeviv brady on October 9, 2010 02:41:45 AM Report
so she gave up the love of someone who was only pretending to care.. for her sake? !  How horribly disloyal of her, how wonderfully arrogant of him,  poor pet.      : )
Comment By: FreeAngel Wings on October 5, 2010 12:48:45 PM Report
True Love is never forgotten....




 


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