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Author Name: Freedazriz 4 Comments
Date Added: September 30, 2010 15:09:12 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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constant
i will be the constant air when you cannot breathe
make your faith my cross to bear if you cant believe
take every dream apon my soul and make them yours to see
as in my heart there is no goal if your not there with me
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on October 1, 2010 11:49:57 AM Report

Loved the flow in your rhymes and meter. Very romantic, full of love and devotion.
~C

Comment By: Freee. Gene Myers on October 1, 2010 11:08:56 AM Report
Nice.  Sounds like you are in love to me.  Keep it up.
Don't know about others, but I liked it.
Gene
New Hampshire?   I grew up in Lebanon, NH.  Went to tech school studying building construction in Manchester at NHTI when it was in the old building on the Hookset Hwy.
Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on October 1, 2010 05:14:25 AM Report
Excellent with plenty of depth,rhyme and rhythm keep up the good work~Graham.

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on September 30, 2010 05:38:23 PM Report
Darren: intense --  I like this.

 

Lady D





 


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