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Author Name: Freevictor69 8 Comments
Date Added: September 20, 2010 08:09:09 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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My Promise
I dont know you
I just know your name
I dont know how you're feeling
I cant imagine your pain

Just know this
You're not alone in your plight
Around you we'll gather
Together we'll fight

In your darkest moments
When you feel most alone
We'll never be far
Just pick up the phone

We'll be there in an instant
Our time becomes yours
Just think about living
We'll take care of the chores
Author's Notes:
I wrote this for a friend who's heart is breaking. The woman he loves is about to lose a long, long fight with the big C.
There was some more of it, but I decided not to post it on here.
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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on November 10, 2010 06:28:30 PM Report
Very touching piece John, nicely written. I hope things workout.......Joe
Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on November 7, 2010 02:25:16 PM Report
What you posted says plenty. If we could say as much to any friend in need, we might bring a bit of light into their darkest trials. We had a minister once who objected to any display of human caring. When someone shed tears, he said, we should turn away. Give them their privacy, not make an issue of it. We were huggers. We didn't keep him very long. Well done. ML
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on October 18, 2010 05:40:20 PM Report
Your generous heart is the best thing I love about you, buddy..MY sean, Sean just lost his best friend to cancer of the spine and lungs...The young man never said a word to Sean unil he couldn't hide the pain anymore...The bravery that must have taken is beyond my imagination....len
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on September 29, 2010 11:45:52 AM Report
Love the new pic sexy! ;-)
The poem is expressing your caring nature and it is good to be such a good friend.
Alison x
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on September 21, 2010 12:04:06 AM Report
How thoughtful of you to write this message of caring. Very nice poem John.

~Barbara D.~

Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on September 20, 2010 10:53:50 AM Report

John, you have always come across to me as being a good heart. This piece of your heart seals it. They say that most friends flee or disappear when they hear the word cancer. I think it is because they don't know what to say or do. You make it pretty simple by just being there and picking up the pieces. Wonderful poem of love and friendship. Your friend has an angel in you.
~Cindy 

Comment By: FreeJosh Williams on September 20, 2010 10:36:25 AM Report
Thank god for friends.
Comment By: FreeAdri on September 20, 2010 10:17:01 AM Report
Oh beautiful my dear.  A heartfelt, honest and emotional piece for your friend. Just brilliant John, really special.
Adri x




 


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