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Author Name: FreeLaPoeta 6 Comments
Date Added: September 07, 2010 17:09:08 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Sweet Whispers

I watch as you dip your foot into the stillness

Small ripples of moonlight define the water

You slowly lean back and pull your hair together

Drops carefully follow the contour of your body

Captivated I am motionless as you now approach

Silence gives way to your honey sweet whispers

Take me from the edge of desires under the surface

Arms bridge the distance we become one tonight




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Comment By: PremiumHOPE on November 17, 2011 02:30:42 PM Report
Lovely Steve,  soft sweet and sensual.  Tina
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on September 8, 2010 05:21:20 PM Report
Very romantic dream-like quality..Sensitive and sensual..len
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on September 7, 2010 08:52:22 PM Report
This is a lovely poem Steve...well done!

~Barbara D.~

Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on September 7, 2010 08:25:58 PM Report
just like the water your poem is fluid...drenched in moonlight...and very romantic!
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on September 7, 2010 06:57:31 PM Report
You always have the most romantic love poems 
you rascle you ... All the ladies love them.... Myself included....(((Smilessss

Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on September 7, 2010 05:46:22 PM Report
You are such a romantic writer Steve. The reader always finds an emotional connection of warmth within your lines. Sensuous hints throughout.


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