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Author Name: FreePelagic Mind 5 Comments
Date Added: September 02, 2010 06:09:50 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Winter Daisy

Winter Daisy

What expectations can we have,
You'll grow and bloom in adversity
Sun drenched others pick easier times,
From winter's decaying browns
But you chose to bud in that loosened grip
When autumnís mantle swathes the ground

 

 

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Some bloom when others don't.. Revised, revised, revised.. and revised
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Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on December 5, 2010 05:34:10 PM Report
LIfe will hang on whenever possible. That's why I believe life in the universe is the norm, not the exception...Lovely write, cuz. Tell me you didn't pick that daisy.. :o)...len
Comment By: FreeRoger Bacon on September 3, 2010 07:26:12 PM Report
Like the metaphor and the writing. 
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on September 2, 2010 11:25:30 PM Report
I really like this Bob. I would make a few line breaks though. Wonderful work...a lovely read. =))

 

~Barbara D.~ 

Comment By: Freecolin skilton on September 2, 2010 05:53:30 PM Report
Very True Bob and when the earth is dark and brown are we not thankful for this glimpse of colours gone?

Last winter was long dark and cold and l was glad to see it pass,now we are heading straight back for it and l will look forward to the daisys saving grace.

Colin

Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on September 2, 2010 01:15:12 PM Report
Hello Bob, 
Great metaphor, your writing is stellar.
~Cindy 





 


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