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Author Name: FreeBarbara D. 6 Comments
Date Added: February 01, 2021 12:02:18 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
Category: Friendship Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Misguided

Dear sister, take my hand

 

 I will tend to your wound

 

 A misguided shaft

 

Recklessly released

 

  Has caused injury

 

The wound festers


 Trails of tears

 

Are testimony 

 

To suffering


Your cries echo across borders

 

 Yet he refuses to listen

 

Or ease the burden

 

 Of Cupid's arrow

 

Gone astray

 

Come

 

To

 

Me




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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumDean on July 31, 2021 01:31:50 PM Report

Sound of a true frienship, which often surpasses blood relations no matter haw far apart. Grand finale with a powerful invitation.

Hope all is good.

~Dean

Comment By: PremiumBruce A. Peaslee on March 18, 2021 11:08:29 AM Report

Barbara   This is a fascinating description of emotional ties we make and break too easily; someone always seems to be on the "receiving" end of of the emotional upheaval.

               Poignant work.

Comment By: PremiumTristan on February 7, 2021 03:41:36 PM Report
Wow.  You have shared a powerful set of words describing the damage that can result from a careless partner in a relationship. But the beauty of your response introduces the us to the nature of a truly unconditional love... which, once again, tells us who you are.  Great write.  
Comment By: FreeAndrew on August 25, 2010 12:36:32 PM Report
such a tender acknowledgement of the pain felt by one so close to you - empathy and understanding permeate these fine words. 
Comment By: FreeBarbara Carleton on August 25, 2010 09:27:08 AM Report
Well done, Barbara.  I feel your deep need to ease your sister's pain.  Would that we had that  power more often.
Comment By: PremiumGlata on August 25, 2010 07:25:19 AM Report
The pain expressed for your sister here is palpable, and the pain she is experiencing is outlined to the point that anyone reading will be able to feel it!  Your verbal description is astounding and this write reminds me of how lucky and blessed one is to have someone like you in their corner. Thank you for always being the loving and caring person you are!

Love you, my sister of heart....You're one in a million!

Glata





 


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