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Author Name: Moderatorlostmysanity 4 Comments
Date Added: August 17, 2010 00:08:13 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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"Sweet Love"
Never thought I could be happy
until I found you
I love you with all I have
your eyes are like water with the sun glistening off of it
you make my heart burn with love like a volcano erupting
you make me tremble like an earthquake every time you hold me
you make my life shine
like the moon in the night sky
You make me feel good
When things get cold
Like snow falling down your shirt
I love you 
Like a duck loves the water
Glad to call you mine
Will always hold you close
Like a dog holds a bone close
Growl when someone mean comes near
I will be there for you
Forever and for always
Like the sun will be there for the trees
Our hearts are meant to be together
Like a caterpillar in a cocoon 
Evolving into something better
Like our relationship
Always getting stronger
Like baby lion learning to hunt
We will be there to learn
From each others mistakes
Be there for each other like a monkey on its mothers back
I love you 
Hope you remember that
Like an elephant never forgets. 



Author's Notes:
For my wife
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on August 20, 2010 07:47:42 PM Report
I'm just busting up laughing at this lovely expression of devotion... Some of my favorite lines are..

 

1.Your eyes are like water.

2. You make my heart burn.

3.I love you like a duck loves the water.

4.Will always hold you close like a dog holds a bone.

5.Our hearts are meant to be together like a catapiller in a cocoon.

6.Be there for each other like a monkey on its mother's back..

7.Hope you remember that like an elephant never forgets.

 

Funny stuff, Foamy...Made my day...len

Comment By: FreeH. Louise on August 20, 2010 10:51:37 AM Report
I love how you have tied love and nature together. Very beautiful poem.

Thanks for sharing.

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on August 19, 2010 10:49:59 PM Report
Very beautiful poem your heart in her hands.....
Comment By: FreeBarbara Carleton on August 17, 2010 08:51:05 AM Report
I like the way you compare your love for your wife to the wilder forces of nature (earthquake for example), then switch to the gentler forms she takes (like the sun will be there for the trees).  Love does have its extremes of  power and gentleness and I think you illustrate that beautifully here. 




 


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