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Date Added: September 30, 2010 11:09:00 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Quilted Hearts by Cindy and Tristan




Quilted Hearts





You move to me so quietly
and lay in silence with me now, 
you seem to just appear to me... 
and then refuse to tell me how.
 
Your heart entices me to you,
fears fall away, your flesh you bare,
your pleas are whispered tenderly
and beg my pen my soul to share.
 
No myth, no tear, no wish, no fear
your nakedness will show me none.
You draw me in so close to you
I seem to dwell with you as one.
 
You fill a space within my soul
our thoughts together make one dream,
yet with you here, so far -- so near,
we are one fabric with no seam.
 
As moments pass you teach me truths,
some answers that Id never known;
 I did not know which things to ask
until your fertile seeds were sown.
 
And yet I know not who you are
nor why, my love, you've come to me
from darkest sky, a shining star,
sent by a prayer to set me free.
 
 
 
Author's Notes:

Rhymed quatrains in iambic octameter.
 
quilting [kwilt-ing] verb [trans.]
to join together (layers of fabric) with lines of stitching to form a bed covering or a warm garment -- or, in this case,
to have Poet and Muse share an experience of togetherness metaphorically described as such.

Painting by 
Gustav Klimt


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Comments:
Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on October 1, 2010 12:25:15 AM Report
I must add to my original comment... the picture adds another texture to the poem...it is very special to me because it is the only picure I have on my fridge...my son and his wife chose that picture for their wedding invitation. It is captured beautifully in your poem.

 

Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on September 30, 2010 10:38:30 PM Report
Wonderful tapestry of two poetic Souls that is just a masterpiece...It is simply beautiful in the complimenting lines...Excellent addition to the CP site...Bravo~!!

Margaret....the Baglady, happy to have read such talent...

Comment By: FreeRoger Bacon on September 8, 2010 08:59:56 PM Report
I was curious of the title so decided to stop in.  Wonderful work you two.

 

 

Comment By: ModeratorHenry M. on August 31, 2010 11:52:50 AM Report
Words sewn together like the finest quilt and with words as smooth as silk that blend together so perfectly. Excellent work Cindy and Tristan.  Hugs,   Henry
Comment By: FreeMichelle on August 11, 2010 06:01:20 PM Report
Very well executed, flowing and beautiful. You two write splendidly together, thank you for sharing!

 

~*Shell*~

Comment By: FreeMoonStar on August 3, 2010 03:21:35 AM Report
WOW!! This was fabulous. You two write so well together that your words just blend together.. Bravo to this... Woven together just perfectly.. I am in awe..

 

 

Moonie  

Comment By: FreeGlata on August 2, 2010 03:50:26 PM Report
Very beautifully sewn together! Enjoyed this tremendously...the two of you are incredible together.
I was disappointed that I reached the end, lol...
Great work, you two!
Glata

Comment By: FreeMary on August 2, 2010 02:03:50 PM Report
yeah id have to say i enjoyed this
Comment By: FreeAndrew on August 2, 2010 01:11:42 PM Report
you two have exerted your considerable skills and woven a rich tapestry - so many meanings on so many levels - very skillfully crafted and fluidly executed - outstanding work
Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on August 1, 2010 09:02:38 PM Report
...mmmmm delicious words and phrases.  fifth stanza was my favorite...teaching truths...supplying answers before the questions were formulated in the mind...what better communication could one ask for between poet and muse? or between student and teacher?  Loved the title and the last stanza as well.  Look forward to reading each entry from this remarkable duo!  ...Ljo, returning to the sewing machine and my own quilting project.
Comment By: PremiumHOPE on August 1, 2010 07:42:36 PM Report

This is truly a beautiful poem, you both write from the same pen, blending flawlessly each line on the page.  This is definitely one of my favorites.

Tina

Comment By: FreeTanya Harrison on August 1, 2010 07:25:17 PM Report
Bravo!  I'm speechless.  What beautiful poetry the two of you make!




 


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