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Author Name: FreeShe Whispers 3 Comments
Date Added: June 26, 2010 00:06:51 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Dead Words

 Dead Words 

There was just nothing left but truthful ashes
in this smoldering fire that's trying to go out

 

Trapped in his loneliness to bitter cold
looking for words that must shout

 

Endless words are thoughts that explain
trying to tell their lover of their pain

 

Read in between the poetic lines
 of a love poem that he sent

 

Then you will understand his love sorrow
that he just have had to somehow vent

 

Teardrops stained the parchment paper
as he bowed his troubled head

 

Trying to write another love letter
before all the words were dead

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Comment By: FreeDaniel on June 26, 2010 01:29:26 PM Report

all words serve a meaning in life, from our first to our last.   often love words hurt us harder than most because we take them so personal.  your poem shows how these words get into our hearts and effect us to keep writing.   my first poem I've read here.


 


Comment By: FreeRobert on June 26, 2010 08:12:24 AM Report
This is IMO a most poignant poem, it reaches into the very essence of a lonely person man or woman  and pulls the anguish forth for all to see Well done I applaud you a good poet always chooses their words cafefull y and this you have done--- again!
Comment By: Freemandate on June 26, 2010 07:31:52 AM Report
This piece reached right into my heart. The lines

Endless words are thoughts that explain
trying to tell their lover of their pain

reached right in and grabbed a hold. All who write to help ease the pain of unreturnd or lost love will be able to relate to this write. The emotion in the write is palpable.

Manny





 


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