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Author Name: FreeAtrophiedRibbons 4 Comments
Date Added: June 22, 2010 11:06:35 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
Category: Love Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
We Defy This Town.
The golden glow that reflected your soul...
so heavenly through that bedroom window
Your smile makes my heart break
Already I'm in mourning of the day I lose your touch

Because I am not worthy.
Because I am unfit to tend to your heart
when I've yet to mend my own..

Your presence is so bright
In light of the ambiance that my darkness creates
And although my acts are complete,
Somehow, so distressed under the weight of this regret,
my meaningless vow still stands

I'll never hurt you again.

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeRachel on June 26, 2010 09:02:33 AM Report
This is a favorite of mine. So simple, yet so powerful. I can really relate to this feeling. Great job. =)
Comment By: FreeAngel Wings on June 23, 2010 11:01:39 AM Report

"For I am unworthy.
For I am unfit to tend to your heart
When I've yet to mend my own."


Wonderful poem , so emotional from the heart..


*Angel*


Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on June 22, 2010 11:42:29 AM Report
Very well written. 

 

LadyD

Comment By: FreeTristan on June 22, 2010 11:31:06 AM Report
A powerful sentiment from a humble heart.  Nice flow and intelligent thought capturing conflicting emotions regarding your love and your lover --  but your vow is never meaningless, unless you destroy its truth yourself.  If this is an example of self-referential paradox, bravo for your intelligence...   and shame on you.   Nice work.  Tristan




 


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