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Author Name: FreeBarbara D. 23 Comments
Date Added: June 15, 2010 15:06:11 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Awaken

Feel me beneath your bark mighty oak

I step barefoot into your strength
Where trust lights the way

To a spacious void

Where I dance carefree

Sashay, sway, twirl

My copper strands splay

Smooth silk swishes of pleasure

 

Covered with a talc of cheer

My featherweight toes tickle you 

As I gracefully flit within your core

My voice echoes through your rings

A song-bird singing a trill melodic poem
Every note proclaims love

 

With fingers sworn to tenderness 

I scatter affection's scented petals

So the perfume of each generous toss  

Will seep into your pores

 

I thrive on substance

At the center of your being

As I bed within your dormant soul

I long for your love

To awaken

 
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeSteve on May 10, 2011 04:14:30 PM Report
Your words are woven together like silken ribbons, a gift for those that read it.  Congratulations on a well deserved award from a long time friend and fan. 
Comment By: FreeFrank on January 22, 2011 03:10:41 PM Report
All I can say is wow I can see how this won an award. I love it so much it's going into my favorites.
Comment By: FreeChristhamF. on November 2, 2010 10:57:05 PM Report
a very  imaginative write
Comment By: FreePelagic Mind on September 2, 2010 12:28:00 AM Report
I really like the images here Barbara, and the metaphores on soul and love.. Reminded me of the passage in Tolkin introducing the Ents.. There's a sycamore outside my bedroom window and I've watched it grow day by day along side of my family, its as much part of my life now as my cats and my kids!  Nice work..
Comment By: FreeMichael Salyers on July 28, 2010 05:02:54 PM Report
The imagry here is absolutely amazing Barbara! You remind me of the one and only person I can say I should be ashamed of the way it ended. Love never awakened. I think that's why I have been cursed to feel the same way everytime I find someone now. I can feel the light heartedness in this poem as well as the overwelming love and the slight abandonment of love being there but not present. 
Comment By: FreeHarold Ham McLelland on July 4, 2010 12:02:43 PM Report
AWESOME write and a well deserved award Barb!!! 
Comment By: Freealisha on June 25, 2010 07:08:49 PM Report
i love this poem, it has so much feeling and power it, very heartfelt.

Congratsulations on the award it was well deserved.

~Alisha

Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on June 23, 2010 10:50:59 PM Report
it is incredible when two poets fall in love and express their emotions so eloquently...this piece resonates with tenderness...and with electricity that seems to jump from heart to heart.
Congratulations!

Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on June 23, 2010 10:47:45 AM Report
*Sigh*.....Ms. Demasson, this is truly a delicate, intriguing look at softness in emotion to strength beyond imagination....There are great visuals and the reader is able to actually "touch" the environment...Awesome work, my poetic friend~!!  I congratulate you with applause as your work is truly award winning~!
Maggie......a friend in words....

Comment By: FreesHeRi on June 21, 2010 10:08:26 PM Report
Congrats Barb-

So glad you've won.

 

Sheri

Comment By: FreeMichelle on June 21, 2010 07:00:49 PM Report
As I bed within your dormant soul.....isn't that how it feels to love someone and to be loved? Amazing and beautiful, congratulations! :)

Shell

Comment By: FreeAndrew on June 21, 2010 08:54:06 AM Report
no surprise that your and your trees reeled in this award!  richly deserved (must have been the font!)
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on June 21, 2010 08:41:15 AM Report
Barbara:  super congratulations on the Feature Poem Award for this lovely love write.  Keep up the good posts, my Canadian friend.

 

Lady D

Comment By: FreeHenry M. on June 18, 2010 10:48:50 AM Report
A beautiful piece to awaken the senses Barbara, your words weave a sensual, magical story.  Hugs,  Henry
Comment By: Freejohn carter on June 17, 2010 05:17:32 PM Report
Sexy! What wounderous words we weave in our poetic entangelment.

                                                                              John x

Comment By: Freeb doneff on June 16, 2010 08:51:18 AM Report
This was a wonderful way to weave my way back here at CP. Your writing abilities have not diminished at all, in fact, I would say they have graduated to a whoel new scale. You get an A for this my dear...word choices, phrases, were allowing the reader to sink into this, as I see we all did! What nice thoughts these are to start the day with..
barbie

Comment By: FreePeter Sammylin on June 15, 2010 08:19:27 PM Report
Barbara,

This poetic beauty just took my breath away....  You write with your heart and do magic with words!  It feels to me now that i was fortuned to have gazed at a treasure and in my describing it afterwards i would only be able to talk of all the wonders in it....

Peter,
Comment By: FreeMoonStar on June 15, 2010 05:56:30 PM Report
Oh my!!! Now this awakened my senses it did! I was floating inside your words on this me Barb, and oh so loven it! You take one inside and bring such wonderful images floating on by that they don't want to come out.. On this one, heck i wanted to stay inside forever!!!

 

Moonie.. Still smillin and sighin.. Ahhhhhhhhhhh

 

 

Comment By: FreeAndrew on June 15, 2010 04:47:28 PM Report
marvelous - love the way this flows - the capriciousness of beauty swirling about the sturdiness of the mighty oak.  your choice of fonts is the perfect compliment, too.  so replete with wonderful images....
Comment By: FreeSteve on June 15, 2010 04:45:51 PM Report
Sweet love, sweet words, sweet poet.   
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on June 15, 2010 04:32:03 PM Report
My that love bug has bitten you both this is jsut breathless as sudden breeze..
you write with such grace.... Love has wings...

Comment By: FreeJo on June 15, 2010 03:37:28 PM Report
*sigh*  This is really beautiful!  I love how visual it is and  image of her dancing beneath the ok.  Its a wonderful love poem which I will remember.  :-)
Comment By: FreeGlata on June 15, 2010 03:14:41 PM Report
Wow, Barbara, this is absolutely BEAUTIFUL!!!! What an awakening this is! Utterly breath-taking...I loved it! (lol guess you couldn't tell, eh?)

Love you gal, and love seeing this side of your writing...Gorgeous!

Hugs...

Glata





 


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