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Author Name: FreeLaPoeta 4 Comments
Date Added: June 14, 2010 15:06:57 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Time Without End

Moving clouds revealed the evening darkness

The moonlight shattered in to a thousand pieces

Human shadows were outlined drifting back and forth

Two slowly circled each other until they became as if one

An unseen wind pushed their emotions like ocean waves

I could feel them both set their spirits free in an instant

Time without end, love without limits, nothing held back

 

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeMoonStar on June 15, 2010 06:24:07 PM Report
Oh softly your words float by me.. Steve this was a stunner and the ending line was what grabbed at you and made you softly sigh... Wow!

 

 

Moonie xx

Comment By: FreeSilkinTears on June 15, 2010 01:25:14 AM Report
I agree with Barbara.. The last line...sigh absolutely wonderful.
Helen
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on June 14, 2010 08:38:22 PM Report
What an interesting way to show the union of two hearts. Very unique and enjoyable read. That last line made me sigh. Good stuff Steve!

 

~Barbara~

Comment By: FreeGlata on June 14, 2010 05:33:14 PM Report
Beautiful and sensual, Steve...a lovely piece of writing here!
Hugs to ya!
Glata





 


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