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Author Name: Freestormwolf 5 Comments
Date Added: June 13, 2010 14:06:18 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Understanding

It’s the innocence in you that nailed me;

That incisive intellect sealed the deal.

Life confounds with its twists and turns.

 We swim upstream as wild salmon,

But come, remove yourself

from the incessant hum of creation…

Find me there in the silence

For there I will always remain,

Our connection

mutually understood.

 

So brief this dalliance in foreign lands

But less alone now

knowing you.

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Comment By: PremiumDavid Turner on November 28, 2010 06:02:03 PM Report
Beautiful metaphors Alison. The salmon opting out of creation for the silence of the wild.



David





Comment By: FreeTristan on June 21, 2010 09:36:03 PM Report
Ali:  I have rarely found myself speechless, but this poem reaches the inner depths of me and will not set me free from its grasp of my soul.  Finding each other, connecting and remaining there -- all within the realm of the silence that is deafening to many and a symphony to few is mutually understood.... the place where loneliness is resolved...   and maybe forever is born.  Beautiful in depth and purity -- a magnificant poem.  Tristan
Comment By: FreeMicky McMaster on June 14, 2010 12:47:28 PM Report
"Find me in the silence"
and now we'll all be looking for you there...  lol

Nicely done
Micky
Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on June 13, 2010 10:42:28 PM Report
Ahhh, you express the beauty of spiritual connection between two souls....always a joy to read your silken words.
~Cindy

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on June 13, 2010 09:09:50 PM Report
This poem affirms the special connection between PT and yourself...."incisive intellect" really makes for a firm bond. Bravo!

~Barbara~
 





 


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