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Author Name: FreeLaPoeta 6 Comments
Date Added: June 10, 2010 23:06:18 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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On My Knees

I looked deep into the sky searching for a sign

Soon delivered an angel passed by me ever so clear

My hands reached out just as day chased away night

The shadow moved slowly and love touched my soul

Down on my knees I was no longer that lonely man

There was enough left inside to let me still believe

This is the closest I will ever be to heaven as a mortal man

The darkness held me until I heard the voices sing

 

 

 

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Comment By: FreeTristan on June 14, 2010 12:29:27 PM Report
Rich in its artistic presentation, and a meaningful glimple into the integrity of the heart that wrote it.  Wonderful words woven into beautiful thoughts... and angel flying too close to the ground.  Tristan
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on June 13, 2010 01:02:28 AM Report
There was enough left inside to let me still believe

 

To me, that says it all...Honest and true feeling here, Shady...YOu have become the romantic guru of CP....Yer pal, len

Comment By: FreeMoonStar on June 12, 2010 03:44:24 AM Report
Just beautiful Steve. Love! Sweet love. Such a powerful emotion and when it touches us deep it's like floating off on the softest cloud towards heavens delights..

 

Nicely done my friend.. As always such a way with your words taking one in..

 

Moonie xx

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on June 11, 2010 11:21:19 PM Report
When someone special comes our way and love touches our soul we experience a piece of heaven on earth. There is nothing like the power of love. Nicely said Steve!

~Barbara~  

Comment By: FreeSilkinTears on June 11, 2010 11:33:59 AM Report
The love for another can surely make one feel connected and therefore loneliness is gone. Love is a wonderful high.
Helen
Comment By: FreeGlata on June 11, 2010 05:02:42 AM Report
As long as you always find it in yourself to believe you'll find the ability to go on. It's when you STOP finding it in yourself to believe that you will slowly fade away.
This is a beautiful write, my friend!
Hugs...
Glata





 


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