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Author Name: FreeShe Whispers 2 Comments
Date Added: June 07, 2010 01:06:17 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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In Time......
Your just above me in this creative  place
But I just don't  ever see your face


Why do you cloaked your name
 in this poetic writing place 

 Why do you stay just out of site
what are you afraid of in this space

 I want to see your face ..

 What do you fear ....
my dear ..
 Is it a smile I trace 


  I am just a smile in outer space 
you don't want my heart in this space 

 Seek another with a pretty face  ...
But in time your age will pace...
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeJo on June 7, 2010 09:57:59 AM Report

I think I've seen this theme going around here.  I think this is a wonderful poem that expresses pain, regret and a desire to move on.  Great job. 


Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on June 7, 2010 09:41:36 AM Report
Ahhhhh, this is priceless, India~!!  Wonder when this will actually come to happening???....What a great write this early in the morning for me...*smiles*....Only time will tell, perhaps, but if it is of whom I believe you speak, he needs to write, as each day is a waste of talent...

Margaret....a friend in words...





 


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