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Author Name: Moderatorhnk903 7 Comments
Date Added: May 31, 2010 10:05:27 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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The story of us

There were two hearts

Who met by chance

Formed a connection

That led to romance

 

Their initial bond

Was that of friends

Little did they know

A lifelong search did end

 

Each had a heart

That was bruised and scarred

Locked inside a prison

Of emotional bars

 

Then came that call

That tentative hello

Their hearts fertile ground

Where love began to grow

 

Each had their lives

Mates and children too

As they continued talking

The need for each other grew

 

Aware of their positions

Nothing did they expect

Love just grew stronger

Built on mutual respect

 

Life threw them curves

Challenges were met each day

Yet these two hearts accepted

That life sometimes gets in the way

 

The day approaches where they meet

To share loves first kiss

The angst will suddenly vanish

About all the time they’ve missed

 

For all the time they’ve been

Never have they fought or fussed

My sweet love, you’ve just read

The wonderful story of us

 

Author's Notes:

True story!

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeSilkinTears on June 11, 2010 10:32:07 AM Report
What a wonderful story Henry. It is so touching to see love have a happy ending. True love in it's purity. Wonderful touching love write Henry.
Helen
Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on June 5, 2010 10:52:01 AM Report
heart warming and beautiful. good to see true love stories still exist! 
as always you write so fluidly about love henry. i am truly happy for you.
~cindy 

Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on June 1, 2010 01:08:51 PM Report
Well, I am "gobsmacked", as Hannah would say~!!  This was on of the most HONEST and WORTHY of being read poem that I have seen on site~!!....I felt as though this one just flowed onto the page from your Soul...Awesome, and then awesome, too...lol....

Hugs, Margaret...a friend in words...

Comment By: FreeMoonStar on May 31, 2010 07:27:45 PM Report
OMG!!! This is sooo beautiful.. I felt like I was floating on a cloud after this read.. Henry me pal you sure know how to touch ones heart with your words and for the woman in this piece I say she is one perfect lady and the two together, well it's MAGIC! Pure and utter MAGIC!

 

Sighhhhh

 

Hugs,

Moonie xxx

Comment By: FreeGlata on May 31, 2010 07:21:22 PM Report
This is a beautiful story of an unexpected love that was obviously meant to be from the beginning...Henry, what a touching write! When love is real, nothing can compare, and THIS is what it is all about!
Life does tend to get in the way...but when something is meant to be, it will find a way.
A beautiful expression of a beautiful love...
And...into my favorites this goes!
Hugs and...................WOW!!!!! 
Glata

Comment By: FreeAngela Carter on May 31, 2010 02:10:39 PM Report
Beautiful. Shows that in the end if its meant to be it will.
Comment By: PremiumHOPE on May 31, 2010 11:31:42 AM Report
Henry

A wonderfully lovely poem for beautiful story.

Tina





 


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