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Author Name: FreeRaspberry Ice Nymph 10 Comments
Date Added: May 25, 2010 19:05:51 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Desires Dance

Music and laughter echo
the chambers of my heart,
Flowing freely through my veins.
rendezvousing in the brain

Where desires dance slowly,
waltzing with images of my desire.
Ah! sweet scent of need creates
an explosive catalyst of elation

Emotional need cling to dampened skin
encouragement sings in the ear
breathless whispers of promise.
Timeless, indelible, immortal
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Comment By: FreeJo on August 11, 2010 03:27:07 AM Report
My only critique would be your use of the world "desire" twice in the second stanza and "need" twice soon after. Maybe mix it up a bit? Love the last two lines... lovely write.
Comment By: PremiumHOPE on August 1, 2010 11:59:40 AM Report
Melody

A beautiful poem.  Your words wonderfully original and so sensual.

Tina

Comment By: FreeHenry M. on July 28, 2010 08:29:27 PM Report
I really like this poem Melody, it has such an uplifting tone to it and just screams out with emotion!  Hugs,   Henry
Comment By: FreeTristan on June 13, 2010 10:08:00 AM Report
The poem is beautiful and thoughtful as it intricately utilizes thought, emotion and the senses to weave a wonderful tapestry of a life's emotional offerings.  Once again, great descriptive word choices from "waltzing with images of my desire" to "breathless whispers of promise" excellence exudes from every verse.  Great writing.  Tristan
Comment By: FreeMoonStar on June 7, 2010 12:31:24 AM Report
Absolutely fantastic my sweet.. Your talent just shines through all you bring forth. This was truly a treasure of words put before us..  Wow!!!

 

 

Moonie xx

Comment By: FreeTerry Russell on May 31, 2010 03:26:40 PM Report
A very beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.
Comment By: FreeAndrew on May 27, 2010 03:46:23 PM Report
"Where desires dance slowly, waltzing with images of my desire".....i love that passage.  gorgeously penned, so full of emotion - an instant smile-provoker.
Comment By: Freemandate on May 25, 2010 08:05:32 PM Report
Melody,

Beautiful. So much emotion in so few words. I like this one.

 

Manny

Comment By: FreeTanya Harrison on May 25, 2010 07:33:30 PM Report
Melody this is an amazing poem. So much elation and joy in every line!  This goes in my special collection. Thanks for sharing your talent with us!
Comment By: FreeLarry on May 25, 2010 07:26:20 PM Report
Great Write Melody....as usual.....Larry




 


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