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Author Name: Freelaura_robertson13 1 Comments
Date Added: May 23, 2010 16:05:51 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Category: Broken Hearts Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Let me in

Broken sounds

Of my instrument

Used to play strong major tones

That lifted my heart

Now play in minor Ė those tones tear it apart.

 

With half a heart

I try to climb a mountain

With half a soul

I try to look into your eyes

But theyíre all shadowy with lies.

 

You were my light in the dark

And now Iím in a cave

A long winding tunnel

Shine the light

So I can find my way out.

 

I need a little help

Take my hand, take me to new lands

Of peacefulness, happiness and a lot of light

Put your arms around my body

Like Iím special, not just anybody.

 

Make everything so simple in this crazy world

Trying to find the words to tell you youíve hurt me

And to repair things

But itís just constant silence

A fight without the violence.

 

Your faith in me is all I need

To get me on to the right path

Just a loving touch, not asking for that much

I just want the truth, a nice truth

Walk forwards, donít be so aloof.

 

I need a little help from you right now

Hold my stare and see that you hurt me

Fix my broken strings, place my hand in you hand

And let the forgiveness begin

Let me in.

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on May 24, 2010 11:04:08 AM Report
A very well-written plea for forgiveness.....Detailed message within the lines, strong, but gently said....Thanks for sharing....

Margaret....the Baglady





 


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