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Author Name: Freedazriz 1 Comments
Date Added: May 13, 2010 11:05:05 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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senseless
i spend each and every moment sitting in the dark
even with my eyes wide open i cannot see a spark
i am lost in constitution afraid of what i might see
so i live in fabrication and set my wandering mind afree
i cannot grasp the life before me niether do i want to know
to see the future pass so gently not take me where i want to go
i cannot hear the world around me muted by my own free will
replaced in kind and so soundly with a back beat i can feel
i can touch but never feel you numbed am i from what is true
whats not there cannot kill you so i wait and sit this through
until the day my heart grows stronger just to see the faintest spark
then my soul will bear no longer the presents of my constant dark
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Comment By: FreeH. Louise on May 13, 2010 12:41:28 PM Report
A very good piece of writing. It reads well too. Maybe if you add some punctuation to it, it would read that bit better though. Just a suggestion.

 

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