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Author Name: Freedazriz 4 Comments
Date Added: May 12, 2010 08:05:10 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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heartfelt
your beauty holds me in a dream i never want to wake
an angels smile with emrald eyes a spell i cannot break
a heart so full of sunshine yet gaurded from the sun
find the key to set it free and forever be her one
i hold her heart against my own i feel its every beat
my finger tips caress her lips the taste they bare so sweet
her gentle skin blends with my own golden hair apon my face
to hold her tight all through the night my one true special place
my heart will know no other she will always be my soul
where ever you are my shining star you will always be my goal
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeMoonStar on June 7, 2010 06:14:40 PM Report
Nice piece Darren! I so loved the flow, your words held such beauty.. And the imagery was outstanding.. I agree with all, fab writing!!

 

Moonie xx

Comment By: FreeAdri on May 12, 2010 04:02:13 PM Report
This is truly beautiful. As Margaret said, good rhyme and tasteful. I really like this. Great job.
Adri x
Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on May 12, 2010 12:12:09 PM Report
Darren.....Nicely rhymed, and nicely written.....Very romantic and tasteful....It would polished, (Detailed Critique Appreciated)...if the spelling errors would be corrected...

((Emerald, guarded, upon))....

Margaret, the Baglady

Comment By: FreeAngelface on May 12, 2010 10:31:52 AM Report
Just breath taking darren! Just have faith and believe in God's will t come! In that perfect place and time, he will bring unto you the one! May God's love shine down upon you and enlighten your path. May he give you patience, happiness and above all to sse..Your true love to be!

 

In Jesus name Amen

Angelface

 

 





 


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