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Author Name: Freedazriz 3 Comments
Date Added: May 12, 2010 08:05:36 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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turmoil
yesterday i was a man now im just a shell
yesterday i had a life now im stuck in hell
tommorow is another day same as the one before
nothing going nowhere never ever anymore
i never see the morning or feel the setting sun
i wake but i dont want to the evening has begun
i stare all day at nothing got no marbles left to lose
cant think no more it hurts me no logic to confuse
i breathe but icant feel it i cry without a tear
my heart is breaking silently no one else can hear
my soul no longer drives me just goes round and round
the world rotates around me but i dont hear a sound
memories and feelings that make a man complete
shattered and destorted they lay beneath my feet
my heart it feels so heavy sometimes to much to bear
you look inside its empty nothing could live there
dreams are just a memory i no longer rest so deep
nightmares are my burden that terrorise my sleep
angels become demons,god the devils son
bright light burning up in flames around the death beat drum
prayers are never answered they just go unheard
as i sit here screaming but no one hears a word
im no longer part of living niether am i dead
i just lay hear bleeding hanging by a thread
how long its been i dont know time as lost its way
how much longer can i bear it how much more do i pay
if this is the price of heaven then ive paid it well
my journeys been a long one coz i spent my life in hell
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Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on May 12, 2010 12:20:11 PM Report
Indeed, Darren, you have expressed yourself very well....It was a gripping, fully informative write about "turmoil"...I must applaud you for writing with such depth.  Few words amiss here and there, but all in all, a great posting...

Margaret...the Baglady

Comment By: FreeAngelface on May 12, 2010 10:41:26 AM Report
Sometimes I feel that hell is a place on earth and that we sometimes do visit it! Seems that heart aches take us through a journey of it! I know this feeling too! Have been down and felt of its grasp. And have to say the only solution to get out of that grasp is to hang on with hope! I do believe in god, and believe He has the higher power to lighten our path way! Smetimes we allow bad things to happen within our lives by choosing the wrong path! I pray that you will find the light as I did! And that you will give God the oppertuinity to turn your saddness into joy! God is a AWESOME GOD he does answer prayers in his time not in ours!! May the Lord guide you and direct you and contuine to heal your broken heart! In Jesus name I ask and pray!

 

AWESOME WRITE, DARREN! Its always good to vent!!

 

Angelface

Comment By: FreeAngelface on May 12, 2010 10:41:24 AM Report
Sometimes I feel that hell is a place on earth and that we sometimes do visit it! Seems that heart aches take us through a journey of it! I know this feeling too! Have been down and felt of its grasp. And have to say the only solution to get out of that grasp is to hang on with hope! I do believe in god, and believe He has the higher power to lighten our path way! Smetimes we allow bad things to happen within our lives by choosing the wrong path! I pray that you will find the light as I did! And that you will give God the oppertuinity to turn your saddness into joy! God is a AWESOME GOD he does answer prayers in his time not in ours!! May the Lord guide you and direct you and contuine to heal your broken heart! In Jesus name I ask and pray!

 

AWESOME WRITE, DARREN! Its always good to vent!!

 

Angelface





 


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