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Author Name: Freedazriz 2 Comments
Date Added: May 10, 2010 21:05:47 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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standing in my shoes
hes standing in my shoes im standing in the rain
my phone he gets to use im drowning in my pain
hes sitting in my chair im chilling to the bone
hes playing with her hair im lost and so alone
hes laying down the law im breaking all of mine
hes locking my front door im crying all the time
his car is in my space my bike is all i got
my mirror wares his face my stomaches in a knot
hes lying in my bed i can no longer sleep
hes bleeding where i bled im weeping in the street
im standing in your shoes remember how it feels
now i get to choose your paying all my bills
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Comments:
Comment By: Freee. Gene Myers on May 11, 2010 08:11:40 AM Report
Weird, but for some unknown reason, I like it.  Not sure I understand it, but I like it.
Good one again
Gene
Comment By: FreeAngelface on May 10, 2010 11:10:01 PM Report
Well sounds like thats just what he deserves after he's taken over your life! My goodness! I know this was  awrite from the heart! Only good writes come from the heart! Keep then comin!!! Can't wait to read more!

 

Angelface





 


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