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Author Name: FreeShe Whispers 3 Comments
Date Added: May 10, 2010 17:05:17 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Numbs The Tongue
Love turns and twist....
 then numbs the tongue 
 
Love uttered so very clear to
anothers heart with passion 
 
But never will those words
 be softly whispered again 
 
His charming poison lies
 forever behind her back 
 
Now nobody's lovers voice....
just the wind passing
through my heart
 
Now it just doesn't make
any difference at all....
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeJennifer on June 8, 2010 10:52:56 AM Report
I like the double meaning of "lies" in this line.
His charming poison lies

 forever behind her back 

 

the ending says it all.

Comment By: FreeTanya Harrison on May 10, 2010 11:25:26 PM Report
I'm loving your poetry.  I loved the clarity of this poem.  I loved Lady D's idea of new adventures.
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on May 10, 2010 05:58:14 PM Report
She:  very well written; time to travel on and find new adventures.

 

Lady D





 


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