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Author Name: Freelaura_robertson13 1 Comments
Date Added: May 05, 2010 16:05:51 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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I can hear the rain crash down
I can hear the rain crash down Ė On silent waters where I look over to the island. Salty air and lonely walks On lonely shores If the sea had a core You could get lost in depths and width of forever.   Crashing at me as if telling me to turn away Drunks throwing empty beer cans, and nets Getting tangled in the waves But youíve all said stuff you donít mean Cast into the sea like rubbish, Alone and my heartís no more than a stone Youíre skimming at the horizon.   It sinks.   Echoes and reflections In drowning winds and rock puddles I donít want to hear another word spoken You said you cared about me Care now my eyes are colourless. I watched you laughing I watched you act sincere I watched you right through me And back to you again I watched you so so fake.   Crashing at me as if telling me to turn away And in-between the crests, thereís darkness Where life lies forever Sleep will come in just a while And peace and maybe thatís when you finally understand everything. And incase you were wondering Iím broken.   And I was going to tell you everything tonight About the cut in the sea And then I was going to look around And be fulfilled with life and know myself New light, changing curves and prospects floating in dreams But then I stared right through the transparent sea And back to you again.
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Comment By: FreeMelody on May 5, 2010 04:50:54 PM Report

Echoes and reflections


"In drowning winds and rock puddles


I donít want to hear another word spoken


You said you cared about me


Care now my eyes are colourless."

 

These lines captivated the readers interest, and there was no disappointment from beginning to end

I truely enjoyed this poem





 


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