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Comment By: leahlopez on July 27, 2013 02:43:57 PM |
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I can understand why this poem has become a favourite surrounding the frail.
Well penned Dan
MITZEE
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Comment By: Angel Wings on May 10, 2010 12:36:35 PM |
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Dan,
What a great poem. Wonderful penned . I really enjoyed the read!!
Angel
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Comment By: Andrew on May 5, 2010 11:52:07 AM |
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Your heart is an experiment. Your heart has passed the test. Your heart has met perfection. Your heart forgives the rest.....by far my favorite stanza in a work full of memorable lines - and all so true. exceptional work, Dan
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Comment By: Adri on May 5, 2010 02:58:40 AM |
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Interesting write. The usage if repetition is well used in putting the emphasis on the subject. Nice piece, I like it and I like the intensity of it. Adri x
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Comment By: mandate on May 4, 2010 06:47:23 PM |
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Dan,
I really liked this. I have always said that as humans we can logic ourselves out of anything. But also as humans the heart will always point the way to what we know is right.
Great poem
Manny
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Comment By: Angelface on May 4, 2010 11:51:17 AM |
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Dear Dan,
Again you write with such inspiration. It's like you know just what to say at the right moment! Don't ever stop writing! Be of peace and comfort in your writing, and know that God is always with you! Your very talented!! Keep up the wonderful work!
GBU Angelface
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Comment By: sHeRi on May 3, 2010 10:49:35 PM |
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I knew the heart controlled many things but this has put that in perspective. In fact I have under-estimated its value.
Good write Dan, I enjoyed this, a bit inspirational, emotional and educational.
Sheri
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Comment By: She Whispers on May 3, 2010 08:21:24 AM |
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Well I think sometimes we have to listen to our heart instead of our mind....There always in battle with each other..... Beautiful as always... your inspiration shows on the parchment.. >> ***** I love this.....If you don't mind I will print this poem and hang this is my office... Always ~ She Whispers
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Comment By: HOPE on May 3, 2010 02:51:41 AM |
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What a beautiful poem. My heart as certainly been all these. I really like the repetition. Tina
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Comment By: e. Gene Myers on May 2, 2010 09:49:05 PM |
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I admit it. I almost missed how you slipped in one line starting with "His" Cute. Amazing how the heart does so many things and still has time to keep us alive. It has a way of bouncing back from the back and waits for the next disaster to happen. What is the word I'm looking for? Resilient I liked the poem Gene
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