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Author Name: Freejohncarter 4 Comments
Date Added: April 28, 2010 08:04:41 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Run Away
Run Away (I found myself writing)

I woke up in a distant place
The flowers still in bloom
The white stone walls so pure
And winsome in their way.
There were miles and miles
Of strangers smiles
Which knew me once before
This familiar me was looking
For wanted evermore.
I left myself for dead
In the arms and charms
Of a strangers bed
But in my sleep
I couldn't keep
My promise.
Secrets hidden deep
Remain my unsent letters
This no man's land seen only
By my betters.
There is no love in the let go
But strong survives in hedgerows
Sway gaily in their play.
I left this other me
Behind it's walls and longings
In the leap to eternity.
I sat beneath my mother
Her ballet was so inviting
Gold and green and sunshine
and found myself writing.
Author's Notes:
I went to France for a while last year. I was not too well. It made me see things differently.

"There is something about her lips or hips that makes me walk faster"  J Carter.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on October 21, 2014 08:47:41 AM Report
There are many changes in our lives and make us look at things so differently...

 Hope your world is so much better now.. Good to see you again ~ Always ~ India 
Comment By: FreeAdri on April 28, 2010 10:00:40 AM Report
This is beautiful, truthful and real. Things happen for a reason... Wonderful write John, one of your best.
Adri x

Comment By: FreeTanya Harrison on April 28, 2010 09:16:12 AM Report
I loved this poem John. It's very creative. Thanks for sharing.
Comment By: FreeJames Lagoski on April 28, 2010 08:59:33 AM Report
Dear John-
Life catches us staring at ourselves sometimes-
And if we're looking, well that is when we truly face our reflection-
This will make us either cringe or smile--
I liked this-
Best Wishes to You and Yours My friend~
Peace~
James





 


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