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Author Name: FreeTristan 9 Comments
Date Added: April 26, 2010 13:04:44 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
Category: Sonnet Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Once More
 
 
Once More


A wanderlust attends my end in peace -

reflections rotting t'ward reality.

Will answers coming cause my question's cease,

and will my walk, my thoughts, show me to me?

Is there a hearth some place where I may go

and patiently await Death to descend?

Will then a stagnant river start to flow

to help me find my feet to face Life's end?

On windward beach my wisdom washed ashore,

your heart awaited sails long overdue,

and cargo - dreams and hopes forever more - 

all lagan, with a love I shared with you.

Across the sea, in sad and lonely eye...

is there, for me, a tear that's left to cry?
 
 
 
Author's Notes:
English (Shakespearean) Sonnet using iambic pentameter about my Muse across the sea.
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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumHOPE on July 24, 2010 07:45:23 PM Report
Tristan

Another wonderful poem.  I really liked the last line.

Tina

Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on June 21, 2010 11:33:25 PM Report
So precise....So smooth....So lovely a write...Pure emotional gift..Tristan~!!....Such discipline, wish that I could master your talent with a sonnet...
Margaret....the Baglady

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on June 19, 2010 06:39:59 PM Report
"Your heart awaited sails long overdue"...beautiful! Excellent work Tristan!

~Barbara~

Comment By: FreeTanya Harrison on May 18, 2010 10:12:19 PM Report

Such powerful emotions in your poem.  The words are very moving and flow so well.


Comment By: FreeAdri on May 8, 2010 06:33:56 PM Report
This is so beautiful! Sonnets are one of my favorite poetic styles, and you did Shakespear proud with this one. A gorgeous description.
Adri x

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on May 5, 2010 10:44:50 PM Report
You reach out with such want and depth...brilliant poem...
Comment By: FreeDark Rose on May 4, 2010 03:54:10 PM Report
Love this poem, it speaks to me and it's beautiful! keep up the great work

 

Comment By: FreeGlata on May 3, 2010 12:47:19 PM Report
Another beautiful piece, Tristan...Like Alison, I don't know anything about iambic pentameters but if this is an example of one, they're maginificent!

Enjoyed!

Glata

Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on April 27, 2010 12:38:01 PM Report
Wouldn't know a iambic petnameter if it fell into my soup but I know a lovely poem of sadness and yearning when I read it.


Is there a hearth some place where I may go
and patiently await Death to descend?
Will then a stagnant river start to flow
to help me find my feet to face Life's
end?

Very nice.
Ali x










 


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