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Author Name: Freela-la908 4 Comments
Date Added: April 24, 2010 17:04:34 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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The Sky
 
The sky today is a pure blue
watching over you and I
wish you could lay in the middle of this
overgrown field with me
 
I am not alone though:
 
The birds are aving their conversations,
trees sometimes dance in the breeze
and ladybirds crawl up blades of grass
 
How do I preserve this day?
I write it for you.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeTanya Harrison on April 25, 2010 01:17:24 AM Report
Such a beautiful piece.  Thanks for preserving the day for all of us.
Comment By: FreePhillip A. Clapham on April 24, 2010 09:20:36 PM Report
Nicely done. I like the wistful nature of this piece, and how it captures the beauty of a day that shines yet is tinged by the absence of someone we love...
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on April 24, 2010 07:06:05 PM Report
Mahala:  I think you and I could sit and so enjoy Nature's glory.  This is a lovely write.

 

Lady D

Comment By: FreePeter Sammylin on April 24, 2010 06:56:46 PM Report
Hello la-la908,

Your lovely description of the treasure of nature which surrounded you on that very moment, had me see a landscape painted by Claude Monet, the father of impressionism....  Wonderful!  Thanks for sharing.

Greetings: Peter




 


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