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Comment By: Jennifer on April 23, 2010 05:15:58 PM |
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well WOW This is sooo good! I love the ending. Jenny
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Comment By: Jillian K. Alexis on April 22, 2010 09:40:16 PM |
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Very nice Andrew! This was hauntingly beautiful...Hugz...Jillian
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Comment By: Angelface on April 19, 2010 10:31:18 PM |
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Seems you always have the words of inspiration to soothe my broken heart! Your a work of art! Love ur work my everlasting friend!! Tx u from the bottom of my heart!
Angelface
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Comment By: Angel Wings on April 19, 2010 11:54:00 AM |
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Nicely penned. Thanks for sharing it with us!! Wonderful job, Dan.
Angel
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Comment By: She Whispers on April 18, 2010 11:12:56 PM |
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Who ever lit that spark for you ... turned on the light of love this is just beautiful with heartfelt emotions....
The candle of my soul was relit by one spark from you.
Our 8th wonder of the world is now a private Smithsonian view.
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Comment By: MoonStar on April 18, 2010 11:09:15 PM |
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This touched my heart Dan.. I felt pain, deep sorrow and thoughtful wonder in these words.. Your imagery was so perfect that it took my breath away in this. WOW!
A keeper..
Moonie xx
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Comment By: She Whispers on April 17, 2010 12:10:33 AM |
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Sounds like you still love her... beautiful written...((( Past tainted promises left no faith in you. Kisses now lightly dip in allegiance of two. Rainbow ends converge to make us whole. Healed now by sharing a kindred soul
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Comment By: HOPE on April 16, 2010 08:32:08 PM |
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A wonderful poem. Love is very complicated. Is it true love if you're the only one doing the loving? Tina
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Comment By: Lady Dragonwyck on April 16, 2010 10:07:05 AM |
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Dan: I like this write. You have quite a creative writing talent.
Lady D
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