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Author Name: FreeRaspberry Ice Nymph 20 Comments
Date Added: April 16, 2010 09:04:28 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Blinding Angels

Emotions dance, titillated by an evening breeze

Stars twinkle, a sensual greeting of enticement
 

Moon promises silence;

“Your secret is safe with me”
 

Yet my heart screams “I love you” waking recognition

Cover your eyes angels of innocence; turn a deaf ear to my thoughts

Shield your fair skin from fires of desire torching the night
 

I ask not forgiveness

Nor cower in shame for mental indulgence

Instead stand naked in the glow of passions wish

Washed in unbridled love
 

Trees whisper;

“Your secret is no longer”

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeJo on August 11, 2010 03:30:59 AM Report
Really like this one. Raw emotion. Congrats on the award.
Comment By: FreeSteve on June 19, 2010 12:51:33 PM Report
A beautiful write well deserving of an award.        
Comment By: FreeAngel Wings on April 28, 2010 12:38:05 PM Report

What A beautiful And, emotional poen. Congrat on your award!!


Angel


Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on April 27, 2010 07:45:37 PM Report
Melody, it is thrilling to see your awards accumulate...and your talent is obvious to all...and shows up in  every piece that you write.  Congratulations!  I am so proud of you, girl! ♥ 
Comment By: FreeTanya Harrison on April 27, 2010 11:36:38 AM Report
Congrationlations Melody, this had winner written all over it! You're very talented, girl! It's a breath taking poem.
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on April 27, 2010 08:08:50 AM Report
Melody:  congratulations for the Feature Poem Award.  Very deserved.

 

Lady D

Comment By: FreeAndrew on April 27, 2010 07:13:15 AM Report
woohooo, ms chilly berry ROCKS - i loved this poem when i first read it and am not the least bit surprised to see it bring home yet another award to you.  very, very well done!!!!
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on April 27, 2010 04:02:26 AM Report
egads I put my comma in the wrong place ;-/
Cover your eyes, angels of
innocence; 

I am only correcting it here as all those who will congratulate you will think I am wrong. Of course, it can get bye without a comma but reads better. ;-)
Again very well done1
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on April 27, 2010 03:50:11 AM Report
Very well done on the award Melody, well deserved. :-)
Ali x
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on April 25, 2010 04:11:19 AM Report
A lovely poem of the power of love's passion. The feeling that it is somehow shamefull too or even unholy, so that angels should protect themselves from it.
(Of course passionate love in angelic too in its own way) ;-)
A couple of extra commas helps the interpretation for the reader.
Cover your eyes angels, of innocence;    passion's wish
I like the way you involve nature as colluding.
'Trees whisper;'Moon promises silence;
“Your secret is safe with me”
I can certainly see both happening and it adds an extra dimension to a very fine poem.
Ali x


Comment By: FreeTanya Harrison on April 17, 2010 01:58:22 PM Report
Such a beautiful poem Melody. Great job.
Comment By: FreeMoonStar on April 17, 2010 03:01:23 AM Report
Absolutely amazing!! I felt this deep to the core and it tingled all the way. You are a master at imagery and your words so define you inner truth and beauty. Well done Sparkly.. well done indeed..

 

Moonie xx

Comment By: PremiumHOPE on April 16, 2010 09:43:05 PM Report
A beautiful sensual poem.
Tina

Comment By: PremiumDan J. Mazurek on April 16, 2010 05:48:22 PM Report
Yes melody your secret is out.

We love what you write about.

With precision  and romantic flair.

Your elegant words are gracefully rare.

 

 

Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on April 16, 2010 03:55:54 PM Report
poets reveal so many secrets about themselves...I guess we would be silent and keep our sectets to ourselves if we didnt have the moon, stars, trees, and all of nature's trusting creatures to confide in...beautiful in every way...♥
Comment By: FreeTristan on April 16, 2010 03:21:47 PM Report
Your descriptions of your passions are magnificant... the flow, thoughts and feelings all woven into a tapestry of the sensual expression are blinding -- even to the readers who aren't angels.  This is a beautiful piece of poetry.  I look forward to reading more.  Tristan
Comment By: FreeMichelle on April 16, 2010 12:29:08 PM Report
Amazing beautiful! Loved every line!
Comment By: FreePhillip A. Clapham on April 16, 2010 11:08:03 AM Report
Wow...just wow. I've read a decent bit of your work now and this one is definitely my favorite so far. I particulary love the imagery and wording of the middle stanza, for it rings of a resounding personal strength within the writer, yet it shows, with brutal honesty, a vulnerability that draws the reader in and makes them truly like the writer and adds a layer of emotional investment that makes the poem that much better.
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on April 16, 2010 09:44:26 AM Report
Melody:  Bravo!!  a beautiful softly sensual write. I did enjoy...

 

Lady D

Comment By: FreeAndrew on April 16, 2010 09:39:00 AM Report
terrific - the way that you establish elements of nature as watchman, witness and judge is very effective.  you do a great job expressing the emotions involved and their impact - overall super work.




 


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