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Author Name: FreeRaspberry Ice Nymph 5 Comments
Date Added: April 13, 2010 07:04:53 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Magical Dance
 

Fairies dance on lily pads,

colorful ballerinas with wings like glass.

Ribbons of silk ,white and plaid,

magic dust about them cast.

As firefly's twinkle in soft starry contrast

Author's Notes:
Lira form...

Five line Spanish form with syllable counts: 7, 11, 7, 7, 11 and rhyme scheme of ababb.

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Comment By: FreeGlata on May 3, 2010 12:53:33 PM Report
A great write, Melody...loved this! Love the style, too...

Enjoyed this...because it felt light, carefree and mystical!

Hugs....glata

Comment By: FreePeter Sammylin on April 30, 2010 07:15:34 PM Report
Hello Raspberry Ice Nymph,

A very fine work with allots of tenderness in it!  I actually believe in Fairies....

Greetings: Peter
Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on April 15, 2010 10:44:09 PM Report
to me you were describing dragonflies...and a striking picture is what you created.  incredibly sweet and beautiful.
Comment By: FreeDavid L. White on April 14, 2010 03:43:01 PM Report
You are able to do with your words, something that I cannot do, for we are quite different kinds of poets. I operate in thoughts/message. You quite wonderful paint magical poetic visuals and pictures--which I admire in your writing.  I am happy there is roonm for both-- but quite admire your talent and abilities.

                   David

Comment By: FreeAndrew on April 13, 2010 10:02:16 AM Report

i'm always in awe when a poet produces a beautiful work in spite of the format!  you did a wonderful job with this, ms chilly berry.  i'm particulary struck by your opening line - beautiful in its simplicity






 


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