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Author Name: FreeRaspberry Ice Nymph 5 Comments
Date Added: April 10, 2010 11:04:32 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Category: Grieving & Loss Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Bitter Wine
Memories of a lost love.
sweet wine upon chapped lips.
Love ferments in a vat of lies,
written in a cheaters script.
 
Past wine has since turned rancid,
teasing a parched tongue.
Don't tell me that you loved me
too many lyrics have been sung
 
As the wine turns to vinegar
your grapes have soured again.
This emotion you perceive as love
shows  how you lied back then.
 
My song has turned to melodies
of love within my self.
Taste better then your bitter drink
kept bottled on the shelf.
Author's Notes:

Sweet wine of love turns rancid with lies and disrepect.The cure is to find the love with in ones self.

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Comments:
Comment By: Freeviv brady on April 18, 2010 04:04:21 PM Report
oh this is a fine poem and nicely understated. lovely imagery maintained throughout.
Comment By: FreeS on April 17, 2010 03:43:20 PM Report
wow love your metaphor here 
youre a real talent cant wait to read more

Comment By: FreeLeila on April 13, 2010 10:32:28 AM Report
Comparing the process of making sth to sth else in a poem drived from a smart brain. Nice!
Comment By: FreeAndrew on April 10, 2010 07:32:47 PM Report
very vivid and very true - beautifully expressed sentiment that reminds that the bitter is never far from the sweet.  and as for the wine - well, tonight i think i'll have a beer.  great job, ms chilly berry
Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on April 10, 2010 12:36:51 PM Report
...ah wise words from your poetic mind...you show us the futility of lingering too long with memories of a lost love...hoping them to be soothing...like sweet wine on chapped lips...but in reality no more than sour wine left in the bottom of the wine glass far too long...oh, I love this piece. you are a teacher as well as a poet ♥




 


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