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Author Name: FreeRaspberry Ice Nymph 5 Comments
Date Added: April 02, 2010 22:04:14 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Simple Admiration

Kaleidoscope of emotions

blending colors of confusion .

Bursting bright before my eyes,

turning from blue to complexity.

Blush pales on ruby lips

glossed by thirst and yearning.

Heart infused with intensity

glows in simple admiration.

With pastels of reason, shade

the abstract fears with calm.

Paint serenity and lucid clarity ,

erasing obscure illustration.

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Comment By: FreePeter Sammylin on May 4, 2010 07:39:30 PM Report
Hello Raspberry Ice Nymph,

This rich, elegant and wonderful composition just made my already delightful day!  And its indeed how it is isn't it?  We always see the one's we love in a daylight of illusion....

Greetings: Peter
Comment By: FreeDamon D. Brewer on April 8, 2010 10:07:47 PM Report
I like this one.  It reminds me of a beautiful lady that is beautiful without all the makeup lipstick and what not.  Maybe because my wife didn't use lipstick either only a gloss to make her lips shine and keep them moisturized.  Great work my friend!  Damon
Comment By: FreeAndrew on April 3, 2010 05:01:04 PM Report
another master-work of mental images in colors so real....and i love your concluding line..."paint serentiy and lucid clarity, erasing obscure illustration...."

great work, ms chilly berry

Comment By: FreeMoonStar on April 3, 2010 10:11:15 AM Report
Beautiful imagery here Melody.. Nicely done..


Moonie xx

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on April 2, 2010 11:06:45 PM Report
Melody:  I really liked the use of colours for this write.  Very nicely done.


Lady D


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