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Author Name: FreeRaspberry Ice Nymph 8 Comments
Date Added: March 31, 2010 20:03:59 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Across the Seas

Standing on the rocks looking out to sea

Waves lapping at the shore in a gentle caress

Winds of change blow full the sails of desire

My thoughts ride the ocean of need and love
 

Imagination unfurls the restriction of distance

Closing my eyes, you materialize before me

My hands slip into yours and we hold tight

Feeling the warmth of each otherís touch spread
 

I open my eyes to empty arms and a heavy heart

Only in my mind does your touch linger still

Ocean breeze swirling around in a dance of loneliness

Tears of longing flow freely from my eyes
 

My future ruled by hope in the journey of dreams

Fear not my prince for you are king of my heart

The same winds of change will bring me to you

Time and distance will be conquered by love

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeKory on June 10, 2010 06:31:22 PM Report
Wow Melody this is an incredible poem.  I've barely gotten on this website recently because I only write poetry time to time when thoughts race through my head, but I must say I always end up back looking at your page, and your poems.  I can feel myself inside of them, it's so amazing.  You truly do have such an incredible talent. 
Comment By: FreeMoonStar on April 2, 2010 06:02:41 PM Report
Melody I was hooked from the first line, till the very last one, which stole my senses. This was brilliant.. Each word lasted on my thoughts and your imagery was perfection.. What a beauty indeed..

 

Loved it.

Moonie xx

Comment By: PremiumDan J. Mazurek on April 2, 2010 06:28:03 AM Report
Melody I looking out at the ocean right now wondering what the tide is going to bring in from your pen again. Our hearts can feel like a heavy plate at times don't ever let it anchor your pen. Keep up the good work.
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on April 1, 2010 07:11:43 PM Report
hey, kid...Didn't we used to be on Poetrypoem together?.....This is a lovely poem of love and hope...len
Comment By: Freecolin skilton on April 1, 2010 04:53:48 PM Report
This is lovely Melody.

May the winds of change blow your courses together so you walk hand in hand by the sea once more.

Colinxxx

Comment By: FreeAndrew on April 1, 2010 08:24:34 AM Report

"Winds of change blow full the sails of desire My thoughts ride the ocean of need and love...." - wow.  this is wonderful.  you know by now that using the sea as a metaphor will always capture me, but the way you connect the vast restlessness of the ocean to the restlessness within you heart - all i can say is "wow."  and the way you conclude, with the ray of hope - again - "wow."  exceptional work, ms chilly berry


Comment By: FreeTanya Harrison on March 31, 2010 11:09:54 PM Report

What a beautiful poem.  I loved each line.  Very touching pieace Melody.


Comment By: FreeLeila on March 31, 2010 11:06:35 PM Report
This is an eloquent poem. Nice!




 


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