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Author Name: FreePoet_By_Heart 8 Comments
Date Added: April 08, 2010 02:04:34 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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" Our Dance "

 

 

" Our Dance "

 

The lights are dim

Here we stand

You and I

Face to face

Breathless words

We speak only silence

Then you take me by my hand

You hold me close

Slowly you begin to move

Your arms around my hips

Mine touching your face

We both smiling,

As I lay my head on your chest

In your arms I feel at ease

Loving every minute of this

A moment cherrished

A night I'll never forget

Thank you !!!

 


Author's Notes:

A romantic close dance

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeScott E Chapman on July 21, 2010 06:30:05 PM Report
Very sweet........
Comment By: FreeSUNSHINE on April 29, 2010 11:51:56 AM Report
Very Romantic sounds like a good time to me, dancing is a great thing
Comment By: ModeratorJillian K. Alexis on April 27, 2010 03:33:36 AM Report
You do romance so well girl.  I really like this poem, that you so skillfully crafted with your awesome talent...Hugz...Jillian
Comment By: FreeAndrew on April 12, 2010 10:38:40 AM Report
romantic indeed - but also sweet and tender - wonderful how the images blend so naturally - "just remember who's taking you home and in who's arms your gonna be....so darlin' save the last dance for me...."
Comment By: PremiumDan J. Mazurek on April 8, 2010 04:32:50 PM Report
very romantic and i second what melody and the rest say.  The pen in your hand is magic this is right up there with immortal love of yours. thanks for sharing your heart.
Comment By: FreeJennifer on April 8, 2010 03:16:00 PM Report
awesome GIRL! THis is romantic as heck! I LOVE IT!
Jen

Comment By: Freee. Gene Myers on April 8, 2010 10:00:03 AM Report
OK   I give up.  What are people commenting on?  The only thing coming up on my computer is a yellow pad with an orange sort of plaid surrounding it.  There is NO writing at all ????  By any chance are you using a size of 5, or above, and "script" as your font?  When I try to post using that combination others can read my poems, but I can not.

Comment By: FreeMelody on March 30, 2010 03:25:59 PM Report
what a romantic moment you penned beautifully:] I hope this love never dies only grows and brings you more happiness




 


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