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Author Name: FreeRaspberry Ice Nymph 5 Comments
Date Added: March 18, 2010 21:03:40 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Virgin Waters

Virgin waterfall

ripples a crystalline pond

liquid stars spatter

 

Sun kissed eloquence

fragile water lilies dance

In azure blue bliss

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Double Haiku
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Comment By: FreeSophie on April 9, 2010 11:33:27 AM Report
Really peaceful imagary here. I'm not very good at Haiku well I've never really tried but I think if you can do them and do them well like yours, then they can create some lovely images in such a short few lines. Well done :)
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on March 21, 2010 04:58:10 AM Report
Beautiful imagery
Ali x
Comment By: FreeJennifer on March 19, 2010 11:51:13 AM Report
THis is so well done! Very graceful and meaningful. Also very vivid in the imagry department! A favorite of mine indeed~!
Jen

Comment By: FreeAndrew on March 18, 2010 11:02:48 PM Report
this is great - simply great - i'm a big fan of haiku and their ability to convey maximum meaning in 17 short syllables.  your ability to create images is a perfect match for this form.  i see it - i feel it - into my favorites this goes
Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on March 18, 2010 10:14:17 PM Report
...one of my favorite styles!  you did one... fabulous... job here...serene, colorful, and oh so creative!




 


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