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Author Name: FreeRaspberry Ice Nymph 9 Comments
Date Added: March 13, 2010 16:03:05 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Confetti Tears
Confetti Tears

In a world of expectations,
where dreams donít come true.
An unexpected rainbow,
is what I found in you.
Skies of gray like dirty glass,
burst into confetti tears.
Colors cleanse, wash away,
drab and lonely years.
A chiffon sun hugs a raspberry sky,
abiding sails the blue of my eyes.
Fireflies sparkle, dance in my hair,
draped in promises that we now share.
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Comment By: PremiumDan J. Mazurek on March 22, 2012 12:31:25 PM Report


masterpiece to read


and to visualized


 

Comment By: Freeshadan on April 9, 2010 11:22:47 AM Report
wow, this is truely beautiful, really like your use of words and their representations, awesome title too..
Comment By: Freeguest_writer on March 18, 2010 04:30:26 AM Report
i enjoyed reading this.
Comment By: FreeAngel Wings on March 15, 2010 12:28:12 PM Report

Melody,


Such a beautiful poem, full of color and lovely words, great job!!


Angel


Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on March 14, 2010 01:52:36 AM Report
I love the sweetness that permeates this poem...great phrases that lift the spirit.  I am looking forward to reading more.  I'd like to define this style as...dressy casual!♥  Ljo
Comment By: FreesHeRi on March 13, 2010 11:57:54 PM Report
such vivid imagery. I like the sound of confetti tears, chiffon sun and raspberry skies..nice combination and choice of descriptive detail.

Enjoy this very much.

Sheri

Comment By: FreeKory on March 13, 2010 07:49:34 PM Report
Really enjoyed the imagery in your poem.  Glad you found your "unexpected rainbow" ;).  Very nice job.

Kory
Comment By: FreeTanya Harrison on March 13, 2010 05:13:43 PM Report
Such color and wonder in every line.  Lovely poem !
Comment By: FreeAndrew on March 13, 2010 04:29:23 PM Report
"Fireflies sparkle, dance in my hair, draped in promises that we now share...." - at the risk of sounding trite - sheer poetry!  another great work, replete with the vivid images that are becoming your hallmark.  notice you slipped in your name as well, ms chilly raspberry!  outstanding!!





 


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