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Author Name: FreeRaspberry Ice Nymph 20 Comments
Date Added: March 12, 2010 10:03:19 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Speak Not

..Speak not of devotion
When lies fertilize the tongue
and the heart is planted deep in
the soil of dishonesty fed only by the
blood of deception.

..Speak not of forever
When in the light of day
it dissipates and fades,
weakening with each
dawn of tomorrow.

..Speak not my name
In haste or reckless abandon,
embrace it only in the light
of purity and respect haloed
by morality.

....For I am Love....
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Comment By: FreeMark Spencer on June 21, 2010 05:04:27 AM Report
I believe that we, as individuals, have a responsibility to pay forward the lessons life has taught us. I am considered stingy with my reviews of poetry because I see so few that share true wisdom. We only have a limited amount of time to leave our imprint on creation. In that time, we have a choice; write for ourselves, and the accolades we receive for that effort, or write to feed the souls of those who read. You have done that here. Everyone wants love, many need it, but few truly understand it. Love is the fulfillment of an ideal that is older than time. It is pure, and unblemished, yet it weeps as one soul after another turn it into something...superficial. True love is symbiotic, when it touches your soul, it becomes part of you, and it never departs. No matter how the relationship goes, true love is there forever, even if the one you truly love is not. I wish that more young people understood how precious, and how powerful the gift of love is. You can only share a first moment...one time; yet too often, when we are fortunate enough to find our soul mate, we do not have a first moment to share. I hope your poem reaches those who read it, and instills in them a proper reverence for the true essence of love. God bless.
Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on June 8, 2010 08:17:40 PM Report
I will speak of devotion,
for I believe in a love so true.
A love that is binding,
this love between me and you.

I will speak of forever,
for true love has no boundries of time and space.
Even in death love can live on,
it only needs to be a thought, not an embrace.

I will speak of your name,
 every single day of my  life.
Having it flow from my tongue,
gets me through the strife.

Terrific write Melody. I have a habit of writng response poetry to pieces that inspire me.....Joe

Comment By: FreeJohn January on May 10, 2010 03:40:15 AM Report
^^inkrebible write..luv thiz
Comment By: FreeSteve on April 18, 2010 12:52:43 PM Report
Congratualtions....a wonderful write well deserving of an award.     
Comment By: FreeTanya Harrison on April 17, 2010 02:13:36 PM Report
Such a beautiful poem Melody.
Comment By: FreeDamon D. Brewer on April 14, 2010 11:29:12 PM Report
Great Write and deserving to win the award Melody.  You Rock my friend, and so does your writing.  Damon
Comment By: FreeBrianna Burton on April 12, 2010 10:11:31 PM Report
This is beautiful!
Comment By: FreesHeRi on April 12, 2010 10:40:06 AM Report
On  a roll there girly...congrats to you,-I enjoyed it very much.

Sheri

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on April 12, 2010 09:12:19 AM Report
Melody: congratulations on this lovely write -- it is so deserving of the Feature Poem Award.

 

Lady D

Comment By: FreeJennifer on April 12, 2010 09:10:18 AM Report
CONGRATS! Congrats! WHoo hoo whoo hoo! I am excited for you!
Jen

Comment By: FreeAndrew on April 12, 2010 07:17:19 AM Report
WOOOHOOOOO - great work!  the ass-kickin' action hero rises to the top - only thing now is to devise the appropriate costume for the Ms. Chilly Berry Action figure!  WELL DONE!
Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on April 11, 2010 11:00:50 PM Report
congratulations!  Well done on the Featured Award!  such a compact, powerful, deserving piece  ♥
Comment By: PremiumDan J. Mazurek on March 30, 2010 07:26:32 PM Report
but I will speak well of loving your poetry.

reminding me of rhymes personal history.

so don't let your phrasings ever fade.

Keep on writing till your old and grey.

Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on March 14, 2010 11:03:35 AM Report
this poem has the stamp of personal experience...and more! I admire what you have written...so true about love.   ♥ Ljo
Comment By: FreeSteve on March 13, 2010 11:17:25 AM Report

I read this several times, slower each time to understand the emotion and imagery woven in to your words. It is very well written and the style of the speaker certainly conveyed a time and place to me.  The underlying emotions are powerful without being overpowering.  Don't hide your talent, when you have the inspiration and time post more writes.   


Comment By: FreeJennifer on March 13, 2010 10:43:12 AM Report
oooh I do so like this!
JEN

Comment By: FreeAminath Agleema on March 13, 2010 12:23:33 AM Report
Excellent This is a beautiful poem
Comment By: FreeAndrew on March 12, 2010 04:33:10 PM Report
wow - this one pulls no punches - normally we think of love in soft and tender terms - you bring it out like an ass-kicking action hero!  i love it!!!!
Comment By: FreesHeRi on March 12, 2010 01:33:49 PM Report
"Speak not" a great intro to every line..Simplictic-If you can fulfill your obligations to my heart then don't! Great Piece Mel.

 

Sheri

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on March 12, 2010 10:34:12 AM Report
Melody:  very beautiful write.  I like..........

 

Lady D





 


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